Post by Karma on Dec 24, 2007 21:03:36 GMT -5
Name: Flamestar.
Past/Future Names: Cometkit, Cometpaw, Flamestruck.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: FireClan.
Moons: 20.
Position: Leader.
Appearance: Flamestar has a solid black pelt. His fur is much longer than average, and usually unkept, but in a way, it looks good on him. He has golden eyes and a lean muscular body. Perhaps the most startling feature about Flamestar's appearance is his enormous scar. It extends over his left eye all the way up to his left ear. Flamestar's left eye has been reduced all the way to a tiny slit, almost unnoticeable beneath the raw red flesh that is his scar.
Personality: Flamestar had always been bitter and complex. He always seemed to be angry, impatient, and easily annoyed. After receiving the scar though, he began to go on a spiritual journey, struggling to find both himself, and the difference between right and wrong, good and evil. At last he developed a newfound sense of who he was and what he wanted. He became friendlier and easier to trust. This change in attitude is what earned him a spot as deputy, and eventually leader.
History: Flamestar was born to FireClan's previous leader and medicine cat. He had always been favored by his mother and neglected by his father. His father had always liked his sister, Aurorapaw best. After the death of his mother, his father began to despise Cometpaw even more. Not long after, the left side of Cometpaw's face was burned off in a forest fire. His father renamed him Flamestruck out of the coldness of his heart. He wanted to keep a reminder of what had happened, as if the scar were not enough.
RP Example: ((This was taken off Magic of the Seasons)) Moonlight streamed into the warrior's den where Mothspell lay awake. It was almost moon high and was one of those nights where she just couldn't fall asleep. She rolled over onto her belly and sighed restlessly. Finally, she decided to go out into the forest for a short walk to calm her mind. Quiet as a mouse, she slipped out of the den, pushing past the bodies of sleeping cats, and padded across the clearing of the camp. Once in the forest, Mothspell felt a cold breeze pass through her fur, and she dipped her head to lap from a small puddle of rain water. Almost immediately she pulled her head back up and looked around with large blue eyes, drops of water clinging to her whiskers, tail whipping from side to side. The presence of a spirit swirled around her, almost choking the light brown she-cat with an overwhelming sadness. Mothspell looked up at the starry night sky and blinked. "Mother?" She whispered, "Father?" The stars seemed to twinkle back at her and tears filled her eyes as she tried to speak. "I-I really miss you..." She mewed quietly, glancing back down at the puddle of water. For a moment, Mothspell just stared down at her reflection, her tears making perfect ripples in the still water. The stars reflected by the water seemed to be speaking to her. But then the moment passed, and the breeze died down. Mothspell was alone again.
Quick Description: Solid black tom with golden eyes and a burn scar covering the entire left side of his face.
Other: Ummm... -Blushes- He's kind of based off Prince Zuko from that show? Avatar: The Last Airbender.
Past/Future Names: Cometkit, Cometpaw, Flamestruck.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: FireClan.
Moons: 20.
Position: Leader.
Appearance: Flamestar has a solid black pelt. His fur is much longer than average, and usually unkept, but in a way, it looks good on him. He has golden eyes and a lean muscular body. Perhaps the most startling feature about Flamestar's appearance is his enormous scar. It extends over his left eye all the way up to his left ear. Flamestar's left eye has been reduced all the way to a tiny slit, almost unnoticeable beneath the raw red flesh that is his scar.
Personality: Flamestar had always been bitter and complex. He always seemed to be angry, impatient, and easily annoyed. After receiving the scar though, he began to go on a spiritual journey, struggling to find both himself, and the difference between right and wrong, good and evil. At last he developed a newfound sense of who he was and what he wanted. He became friendlier and easier to trust. This change in attitude is what earned him a spot as deputy, and eventually leader.
History: Flamestar was born to FireClan's previous leader and medicine cat. He had always been favored by his mother and neglected by his father. His father had always liked his sister, Aurorapaw best. After the death of his mother, his father began to despise Cometpaw even more. Not long after, the left side of Cometpaw's face was burned off in a forest fire. His father renamed him Flamestruck out of the coldness of his heart. He wanted to keep a reminder of what had happened, as if the scar were not enough.
RP Example: ((This was taken off Magic of the Seasons)) Moonlight streamed into the warrior's den where Mothspell lay awake. It was almost moon high and was one of those nights where she just couldn't fall asleep. She rolled over onto her belly and sighed restlessly. Finally, she decided to go out into the forest for a short walk to calm her mind. Quiet as a mouse, she slipped out of the den, pushing past the bodies of sleeping cats, and padded across the clearing of the camp. Once in the forest, Mothspell felt a cold breeze pass through her fur, and she dipped her head to lap from a small puddle of rain water. Almost immediately she pulled her head back up and looked around with large blue eyes, drops of water clinging to her whiskers, tail whipping from side to side. The presence of a spirit swirled around her, almost choking the light brown she-cat with an overwhelming sadness. Mothspell looked up at the starry night sky and blinked. "Mother?" She whispered, "Father?" The stars seemed to twinkle back at her and tears filled her eyes as she tried to speak. "I-I really miss you..." She mewed quietly, glancing back down at the puddle of water. For a moment, Mothspell just stared down at her reflection, her tears making perfect ripples in the still water. The stars reflected by the water seemed to be speaking to her. But then the moment passed, and the breeze died down. Mothspell was alone again.
Quick Description: Solid black tom with golden eyes and a burn scar covering the entire left side of his face.
Other: Ummm... -Blushes- He's kind of based off Prince Zuko from that show? Avatar: The Last Airbender.